Ornamentation Storyboard

Presentation Feedback

The main points to come out of the presentation were:

some parts of the presentation could have been better represented.

for example, the story board was hard to understand, because they did not show how the people moved past the major landmarks (which in this case are the ornamental spaces). so a story board based around the ornamentation would be better.

another way to improve the presentation is through more 3D images that show how the building really looks. I found that these communicative images were lacking in the presentation and it became hard to understand.

furthermore often these images are the best looking for presentation so putting more in would improve the appeal.

Sketchup Outputs

Flythrough.

I made a flyover of the building just to show the way the plan of the building works and how it looks from each side. its pretty dodgy but thats mostly my sketchup abilities, or lack of.